The Waitress, the Whiskey & the Handcuffs: Part I – The Waitress

The Waitress, the Whiskey & the Handcuffs
The Waitress, the Whiskey & the Handcuffs
The Waitress, the Whiskey & the Handcuffs
Part 1 of The Ruby Chronicles

Ruby Daniel is a 30-something widow trying to get by in a small backwoods Northern town in the 1950’s. Her chicken farm is failing, and she takes a weekend job as a barmaid at an illegal drinking establishment run by a crooked police officer, hoping the extra income will allow her to keep her farm and raise her kids.

When her crude and offensive employer plays an embarrassing prank on her, Ruby gets revenge with the help of her mother, whose devious tactics and unrestrained glee in the details of retaliation leave Ruby in awe, and a little fearful of the woman who raised her.

This comedic short story will leave you laughing out loud and cheering Ruby on, as she learns that standing up for herself can sometimes backfire, but revenge really does taste sweet – and an indignant mother is a surprisingly fierce force to be reckoned with…

Part I – The Waitress

In 1957, Ruby was a 30-something waitress/barmaid/short-order cook in an out-of-the-way backwoods tavern down a side road off the highway. She was also the bookkeeper, the housekeeping staff and the bouncer, although she didn’t get paid extra for any of those tasks – there was just no one else to do them. It may not have been fair, but a job was a job, and she had kids to support. She kind of enjoyed the bouncing duties, anyhow.

Ruby never would have used the term 30-something to describe herself. She would be much more likely to say, “Mind your own birthdays,” if asked her age by any of the ne’er-do-wells that frequented the place, which was so far back in the sticks that it didn’t even have a name. Everybody called it The Dump, because if you drove another quarter mile down the side road, the town dump is where you finished up.

Ruby had lived a fairly decent life up to becoming employed at The Dump. She’d married a little on the late side, if 25 could be considered late, but at least she’d married. Her husband bought a small chicken farm up the North Side Road after the war, and asked Ruby to marry him the very same day. Roy had seen her to a few dances over the years, and written from overseas, but Ruby hadn’t really ever considered him to be a serious suitor. His proposal came out of the blue. Ruby asked for a day or two to think it over.

There wasn’t much to think over, really, when it came right down to it. She’d known Roy all her life. She knew he was a hard-working man and she doubted he’d run around. His was certainly the first proposal she’d received, and she wondered if there would ever be another if she turned him down. The practical side of her realized that they were a “good match”, as her mother would say (and did), and there wasn’t much of a romantic side of Ruby to contradict the idea, anyhow. When Roy returned for her answer, she accepted his proposal and cooked him the first of many suppers while they worked out the arrangements.

Chicken farming didn’t turn out to be as lucrative as Roy had hoped. By the time the two kids were in school, he had taken a job driving truck on the city run for Fulton Berries, the only hothouse strawberry growers in the district, so at least he was employed year ’round. It meant Ruby had to run the farm on her own through the week while Roy was away, but they got by all right – until Roy crashed his truck one Christmas and killed himself in the process.

Ruby, ever practical, moved her mother in to help with the kids, and took the weekend job at The Dump before Roy was in the ground a month. The first shift she worked was the first time she’d set foot in such a place, but she got used to it fast. Chicken farming was harder work than beer-slinging. She still ran the farm mostly on her own, and generally missed Roy most when she had to do the slaughtering. It was a messy job, killing chickens, and bouncing drunks was more enjoyable.

The Dump was open on Friday and Saturday nights, from 7 pm until Ruby managed to shovel the last drunk out the door, which was usually close to 4 am Saturday morning, but only about 1 or 2 am on any given Sunday, because nobody dared miss church in the morning. Those that were married didn’t want to deal with their wives (and mothers-in-law); those who considered themselves lucky to have avoided that ball-and-chain didn’t want to deal with the married gents – it was on their farms and in their businesses in town that all the single fellas earned their livings.

The only three men in town to avoid church without guilty consciences on a Sunday morning were the same three that made Ruby clench her jaw and grit her teeth the most when they walked into The Dump. Two were the loudest, and the most obnoxious, and all three were the only ones she didn’t dare try to bounce.

The biggest, loudest, and most boorishly obnoxious of them was a cop – and a district officer to boot. The little spot on the highway called “Town” was too small for a police department of its own, along with all the other little blips up and down the line that also called themselves “Town”, so the district was responsible for policing the whole string of them, all dotted along the highway from the big city in the East to the one in the West, and, with government-like lofty wisdom, those great minds in charge of the district decided that Judd Gulley should be the great arm of the law over several of the little towns between those two points. Judd was also the owner of The Dump, and therefore, Ruby’s boss.

Wally McDonald was Judd’s best buddy, and they might as well have been joined at the hip. Wally had never worked a day in his life, and Judd thought that was just fine. Wally rode shotgun in Judd’s cruiser every shift, and when Judd was off work, he unstuck the cherry from the roof and Wally rode shotgun while the cruiser was just a plain ol’ sedan.

The third guy that Ruby didn’t dare bounce was Wilson Jones. He was “no higher than here,” as Ruby would say, holding her hand level just below her bust, and considered not quite right.

“In the head, that is,” Ruby would say. “Not stupid, exactly, but… well, he don’t even look right, if you catch my drift.”

Wilson was known around town as “The Little Drunk”. He was a logger, and a good one, by all accounts, in spite of his size, and shy as all get-out, probably because of it. He came out of the bush on Friday night, cash in hand, and he’d spend every cent of his week’s wages on booze by the time he crawled back in on Sunday night. He very rarely spoke, drunk or sober, and when he did, he didn’t make much sense. Not quite right.

For some reason, Judd Gulley took a shine to The Little Drunk, and Ruby was told that every third drink she brought him was on the house. Ruby told Judd he was an idiot.

“I know he’s an idiot, but that’s what you’ll do.”

“I mean you’re an idiot, Judd Gulley,” Ruby shot back, but she did as she was told. She wasn’t to charge The Little Drunk for his meals, either, and since she had to cook those meals, that burned her even more than giving him free booze.

Worst of all, Judd kept a room upstairs for The Little Drunk to pass out in on Friday and Saturday nights (free of charge, of course), and it was up to Ruby to keep the linen clean. And dang, if the Little Drunk wasn’t a bed-wetter.

The first time she’d had to change those sheets, she hadn’t thought too much of it. Accidents do happen, especially where drunks lie down, and God knew she’d changed her share of pissy beds in her lifetime. But when the bed was wet the following day, too, she gave Judd what-for. For the life of him, Judd couldn’t understand what her problem was.

“He don’t give the room a chance to air before he stinks it up again, Judd, that’s the problem!” Ruby complained. “That mattress is ruined, if it don’t get a chance to dry before he pisses all over it a third time!”

“Well, whad’ya want me to do about it?! Throw on some cornstarch and flip it over,” Judd laughed. Wally, the skunk, laughed right along with him, and Ruby wanted to bash their heads together. This conversation took place on a Monday morning, the first chance she had managed to run into Judd, right out on Main Street. Ruby stood on the sidewalk, face-on with Judd and Wally in the cruiser, with seemingly every old maid in town chancing by to cluck her tongue. Ruby was livid.

“There’s only two sides to a mattress, Judd Gulley, and the next time Wilson Jones wets the bed, that mattress will be in the parking lot!” And that’s where she dragged it, the following Saturday afternoon, and left it there, soggy and stinking to high Heaven, for Judd to find when he pulled into the parking lot.

“That’ll fix The Little Drunk,” Ruby thought.

But, Judd just laughed, and Wally along with him, and the two of them roped the mattress to the bumper of Judd’s sedan and dragged it further down the side road to that other dump. And when Ruby went into The Little Drunk’s room the next afternoon, she found an honest-to-God straw tick on the bedsprings; something she hadn’t seen since she was a kid. Worse, it was wet, and the smell of urine mixed with dirty straw dang near made her upchuck.

She threw some corn starch on it, opened the window, and an hour later went back up and flipped the tick over. She knew, too, that next Sunday afternoon would see her dragging it out back and emptying the straw, to wash the burlap. But she’d be danged if she’d stuff a new tick. If Judd Gulley didn’t see fit to cut straw, The Little Drunk could sleep on bare springs for all she cared.

If Ruby had known what was going to happen two years later, she’d likely have seen fit to cut straw herself, after all. As it was, she wished she’d had the sense to quit that God-awful job before the Whiskey games started…

The rest of “The Waitress, the Whiskey & the Handcuffs” is available in several formats, at The Les Becker Bookshop.

7 Replies to “The Waitress, the Whiskey & the Handcuffs: Part I – The Waitress”

  1. Bravo! Well done.

    Great character development – pulled me right along.

    Les Says: Thank you, Mushy. Coming from a wordsmith such as yourself, that really means a great deal to me.

  2. I LOVED that story, Les! You definitely have a way with words. I swear I can smell the pee-soaked straw. I hope Ruby mows the grass or bakes chocolate chip cookies next time.

    Les Says: Oh, geez. Ummm. Noooooo, not exactly. Although, I DID have cookies at the “really” Ruby’s this evening.</em?

  3. “That’s quite the story. You have a vivid imagination.” (Said very dryly… )

    Les Says: And then she CACKLED at me.

  4. I’m not sure how I missed part 1 Les, but I shamefacedly admit that I did.

    This is great, absolutely great. I can picture the characters, the places, damn I can even picture that disgusting mattress.

    Now I’m going to read Part 2.

    Les Says: Wow, thanks, OldGuy! I’m glad you finally got to see it. Be careful with Part II, though – a full stomach really isn’t a good idea…

  5. Well girl, you’ve done it – brilliant! You’ve crafted something special here, the characters sizzle, the story jumps, and we’re all right in there with you. Can’t stop, I’ve got part two to devour..

    Les Says: I’m so glad you finally got the chance to come and read it. Yours was one of the opinions I was really looking forward to.

  6. I love narrator’s voice, the wry humour. “Mind your own birthdays” – LoL! And bouncing drunk folk being much more preferable to killing chickens? Such an unusual comparison, it had me chortling as I read it. And you left the part with just the right amount of build-up and anticipation. I’ll be back to read Part 2 and more in a few days. 🙂

    Les Says: Thank you, Willow! As you can see by the original post date, this is an “old” story – in Internet-Time, anyway… I reread it when I put it back on the blog, and was relieved to be just as pleased with it as when I first wrote it. I’m glad you like it, too!

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